JinsokuMan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

["Seeing is Believing" rap]

Catchy song, and nice animation though a bit choppy. By that I mean how you chose to loop a LOT of parts over and over (the main offender being the DJ at the turntables). The stills were gorgeous with the green electricity riding through the wires, which you animated beautifully.

I must say, and I'm surprised I'm not seeing this repeated here, your lip syncing - with the exception of right before his transformation - was pretty freakin' spectacular, so great job on that! To give you an example of where the looping can kill that feel though, is when you reverted back to a looping animation with the mic covering his mouth.

I'm not calling you lazy. Far from it. It's just that there seemed to have been two levels of animation in this one thing. From amazing to a rush job in no time flat, and I think that hurts it. That being said, it seems like you did have a deadline, and I hope that on your next animation you have none and do it at your leisure and best. I'd like to see more of your smoothness, and less of your rush-job. :)

5'd for entertainment though!

MindChamber responds:

I definitely agree. Im going to try really hard to budget my time out correctly on my next submission and get the quality leveled out in all areas. I definitely harped on that breakdancing scene which left me scrambling towards the end.

thanks again for the review.

[Left 4 Bed]

NICE!

You took that amazingly hilarious audio and added some nice visuals to it, freakin' amazingly funny as hell visuals to boot! GREAT job on the zany crazy facial expressions. 5d, 10d.

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

:D.

[The @ Team]

Uh, what?

I can't say I get the funniness here. Why is the Mr T copy look like a bunch of eyeballs spliced together with its own eyeball?

I'm confused.

Honestly, I only cracked a smile with the whole "LA Underground" thing, because, well, that was just clever.

Ushnor responds:

Look up the clock crew boyo

[SRM: The Last Soda]

Hah!

Very good. The voice work needed a little work, (as in, I could hear the cut in and out of the mic sometimes).

Other than that, funny. Can I buy the rabbia a Coke?

Battosai810 responds:

Glad you liked the toon. Wish the recording quality was a bit better though, especially on Nose's one line. Thanks for watching.

[flinkys 10]

Eh... no

You obviously have the patience since you put it all together, but seriously, more effort, man.

diogoshx responds:

hm ok

[FML # 1]

Wow. Nice.

That was actually pretty good. I gave you a 5 because it was good, review rating of 8 only because it felt very minimal. The subtle movements were fine, but something about it could've been a little better. Perhaps more hand gestures or something? I dunno.

Loved the ending. Keep it up, man.

fearing responds:

Thanks a lot pal! Really appreciate the high score my friend!

This was definitely minimal. I was recently watching Seth McFarlanes cavalcade of cartoon comedy. I think he does well to keep things interesting with the audio and minimal movement in the animation.

Ill try and work some more movements into the next one though :-]

thanks again!

[S13 - I Want It! Syndrome]

Very very very nice

Great animation.

One question, though, (and this is the first I've seen of your stuff, and I haven't gone into your profile to see if there's an explanation), but why voice it in a different language and then sub it if you speak English?

Nightwayfarer responds:

i know enlgish, but I can't voiceact it :P